I actually spent a long time on this one! ...Well, compared to how long I usually spend on things... Aside from anything, my cat fell asleep on it and left some stains and things around, but I think I covered most of those up... I was having a heck of a time with the general compositional arangement and posing and all that sort of thing. I tried really hard with the proportions on this page, so hopefully there wont be as many blatant errors as there were on the other things I've put up. I'll go back and fix those sometime, if I can find the originals.
Thank you and whoever else I asked about comments on this thing while I was drafting it, you helped me out a lot! Sorry though , I wasn't able to figure out anything for your suggestion, so I sort of just made it an implied still shot.
I hope Blaze looks a little less ugly in this one to you ! I tried to put in some good face shots for you.
This is another wonderful example of me screwing out any background I could possibly have implimented. What does that room look like, anyway?
Yeah I have that problem too when I draw things with allot of detail, Especially when I have the side of my hand on the paper while drawing. Then my whole hand gets covered in pencil and the paper gets all smudged.
Yea... people have suggested that I put a piece of paper under my hand that rests on the page while I draw, but it always seems to get in the way when I do that.
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Are you sure it's supposed to be fuzzy? Cause I'm pretty sure metal shouldn't do that...
I know it would get in the way if I did that, Actually putting your hand there kinda seems like a mood setter to me. Putting paper there would disrupt it, uh but some people might not see it that way. xP
Ahh, I'd pretty much just say add motion lines to the gal in the helmet.? I think that might work *is unsure* And on his sliding leg in the last panel. The third panel works really well.
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Are you sure it's supposed to be fuzzy? Cause I'm pretty sure metal shouldn't do that...
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Are you sure it's supposed to be fuzzy? Cause I'm pretty sure metal shouldn't do that...
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Are you sure it's supposed to be fuzzy? Cause I'm pretty sure metal shouldn't do that...
LOL, glad to hear it.
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Are you sure it's supposed to be fuzzy? Cause I'm pretty sure metal shouldn't do that...